Writing Children's Books(Highline CC extended Learning)
CEUs: 1.2 July 9 - August 27 - 8 Wednesdays 6:00 - 7:30PM
Main Campus Bldg 10 Rm 201
Story board & original drawings. Plan working in color or Black & white. Pencil sketches for story board. Homework, writing a developed character image from the story board or otherwise
JUL 23, 2008          
CLASS 3

our text
 




wireless notebook
separators
3 ring binder

I contemplated showing a movie "You've Got Mail" in class. It does a good job of presenting the atmosphere of a children's book store and a bit of the business machinations that must go on in the retail end of the business. It is a nice tale with a happy ending, but might not make an appropriate story for a children's book. Seeing the collected number of picture & story books with little stories about the books makes for a satisfying experience. I recommend it even if I don't require it.

In our text book the authors spend several chapters talking about storytelling, and the process of making a children's book from a well tried story. Sometimes the story is written for an individual child and sometimes for more. However they recommend giving the story a repeated trial, telling it several times to gauge reactions and modify the form. In addition the process of story telling enhances our abilities making us better children's book authors.

Earnest Hemingway often told about his writing process. He set aside several hours (4) a day and did nothing else while he sat in front of his typewriter. Sheer boredom would get the best of him and he would write - forcing a process that never waited for inspiration. Many hundreds of years have been spent waiting for inspiration. By comparison a little lost time sitting in front of a typewriter seems like a small thing. A computer keyboard is a bit different, there are always internet places to explore and pastime computer games to eat up our concentration. Concentration and focus seem like relics of a bygone era, but they are as close as our desire and imagination. I have said that I don't believe in talent. I believe in desire and tenacity. If you have these you will do what you need to do to get what you want.

 

On the pragmatic side, keep in mind the fact that the initial consumer is the adult parent or buyer who looks for interesting worthy examples to give to children. You are writing for them too. A good escapist story serves a wider audience than you think; remember the "children's" book "Harry Potter"! What they enjoy as children, or what they can imagine enjoying by the child within they will enjoy today. We also write for the child within that adult. As the parents buy, so the children will read what is provided. Write for the former child - the audience is vast.

Last week's homework: http://www.loisbrandt.com/Princess.html

Last time I mentioned that the text for children's books is often put together in thematic formats. In the movie, Meg Ryan's character describes the "Shoe books" by Noel Streatfeild [Ballet Shoes, Dancing Shoes, and others]. In other creative forms, there is often a theme or series that serves as a cohesive link to a collection of works.

I once asked a mentor to tell me how he was able to produce enough work for 5 one-man shows a year.  He told me that in every good idea it is possible to produce variations in size color or emphasis to manage at least 5 pieces per good idea. This also generates a process of perfecting the original concept to produce an ultimate or "prize-winning" piece that could be used for competitive work or for museum donations to make the artist's name. I've never been at a loss for good ideas since that time. This process will translate well into any other creative work generating a series of short stories or eventually a series of books.hese devices are relatively easy to conjure into existence, but can be difficult to polish and refine into authentically appropriate forms that serve the purpose. Sometimes too much fiddling can have a negative effect on the result, but the fact remains that poetry is the fine art of writing carried to its natural upper limit. At the same time poetry can represent the ultimate degeneration - the limerick. Keep the first in view, while avoiding the second.

Most "how-to-books suggest many ways to construct our tales: character studies, plot lines and word pictures. Images are a big part of children's books, whether written or drawn, they paint the pictures we see when we read the books and influence how the story is accepted or remembered. Whether we choose picture book or story book, the job of the illustrator is integral. Remember that we are telling two stories, one with words and word pictures and one with pictures, designed to stand alone apart from the writing to convey almost the same story as the words, but designed to augment and enhance the experience of the word pictures. Neither should be dominant, as far as we are able to control such things. Learn to draw word pictures as well as thumbnail sketches to help explain the work to yourself as well as your audience. Use the journal & sketchbook as a prod to memory or as a tangible memory extension for editing & future work. Record your ideas while thinking & composing. Allow yourself to make images not much more than doodles to generate ideas. Illustrate your stories as you write.

Ongoing
Homework

Put family story ideas in journal/sketchbook. Deliver in-class recitation when ready.

This week's homework. Create 2 stanzas to extend the Judith Viorst poem "Learning" or "Thank you Note", be conscious of voice in the content of your work. http://www.poemhunter.com/judith-viorst/

Materials

1. class text- Text - "How to write and illustrate Children's Books and get them published" consultant editors: Treld Pelkey Bicknell and Felicity Trotman -Quarto Publishing plc ISBN 1-58397-013-0
2. wireless lined journal notebook removable pages 3 ring holes
3. a 3-ring binder, with dividers
4. Writing & drawing implements, a set of color markers

Bibliography link: "Waste equals Food" by William Mc Donough

links: for class notes www.jonraderjarvis.com/classes.htm and email contact address jrj@jonraderjarvis.com
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